Tuesday, 24 January 2017
The Reveal
Today, was the reveal of my cousin brother’s customized and armored, Nissan GTR.  My cousin brother told me that it was going to be all black steel and have a mauve pearlescent.  I, my mom and dad drove to the dealership.  I brought some baby carrots along just in case I get hungry.
When we got to the dealership, my cousin brother showed me a sneak peak of the GTR.  It looked absolutely gorgeous under the Nissan car cover.  After my cousin was finished with the paperwork, it was time for the grand reveal.
We all stood in front of the car, I was so excited.  The manager of the dealership came and slowly unrevealed the beautiful car.  It looked better than I imagined.  My cousin was tearful in joy.
After the magnificent reveal, we got some food and went home.

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4 comments:

  1. Scarface25 January 2017 at 13:44

    In the third paragraph, first sentence you said "We all stood in front of the, I was so excited. It doesn't say what you stood in front of''

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  2. 100wcbyfread.com25 January 2017 at 15:43

    Thank You, Deadpool.

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  3. MJ27 January 2017 at 16:02

    The last paragraph doesn't make sense and doesn't have enough detail.

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  4. 100wcbyfread.com27 January 2017 at 16:10

    Thanks MJ.

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